enterance [mandatory!]

Pax hauled in her luggage. It wasn't as easy you thought. She had only one suitcase, but it was heavy. Most of her clothes was in there and so was some important items she favored the most of all her possessions. There was no space after all those things she put into her bag. She even had to sit on the lid while her father tightly zipped the bag back up! Luckily they were able to close the bag after various ideas to the situation. She had on modest, yet summer-fitting clothes. She assumed that there would be a very high temperature in Oregon like in California, but boy was she incorrect. She sighed, but refused to change any time soon. It wasn't that much of a problem. Nobody would dare touch a lesbian anyway. She's not easy, after all. That's what all the boys thought. "You look so cheap.", was what one of them said; in no time Pax never trusted another boy. She realized she wasn't the one who was cheap, but rather men in general. It's an ignorant way of thinking. How can you identify yourself at such a young age? Whatever you say, may never be true. Especially at such Pax's age of sixteen, they're all just lies you tell yourself to make clear up any emotions of depression. It's not very smart to throw away your youth that way. However, Pax is only a child; Children make mistakes and they learn from them.